This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.
We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some food fruits. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll Money and a soft toy stuff bear After that we went to the shop food market .to buy some clothes, I got two new items stuff and a pair of shoes footwear. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block ice creme. Lucky me!
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