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Thursday, 26 November 2015

WALT use precise nouns to add details for our reader


This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more  specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some food fruits. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll Money and a soft toy stuff bear After that we went to the shop food market .to buy some clothes, I got two new items stuff  and a pair of shoes footwear. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block ice creme. Lucky me!

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